Re: [PSUBS-MAILIST] Re: PSUB Logo

[Ed Greany <crest25@attglobal.net>]

Ray,

Don't you want uniformity in all the words? 

Here's your original exhibit:
To promote and encourage the discussion, designing, building,
certifiying, owning and use of Personal Submersibles.

Here's possible #1:
To promote and encourage discussing, designing, building, certifiying,
owning and using Personal Submersibles.

Here's possible #2:
To promote and encourage the discussion, design, construction,
certification, ownership and use of Personal Submersibles.

Any interest in #1 or #2?

Personally I like #2.

Ed




Ray Keefer wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> The grammer was intentional. It was meant to encourage do"ing". Not
> just talking about designs, construction, certification ownership and use
> of. But actually encouraging someone to do it.
> 
> Regards,
> Ray
> 
> > From: Alec Smyth <Asmyth@changepoint.com>
> > To: "'personal_submersibles@psubs.org'" <personal_submersibles@psubs.org>
> > Subject: RE: [PSUBS-MAILIST] Re: PSUB Logo
> > Date: Thu, 21 Jun 2001 09:44:41 -0400
> >
> > I particularly like the font of the "welcome" sentence. However, I would
> > point out the grammar of the subtitle is incorrect. I currently reads "To
> > promote and encourage the discussion, designing, building, certifiying,
> > owning and using Personal Submersibles."
> >
> > How about "To promote and encourage the discussion, design, construction,
> > certification, ownership and use of Personal Submersibles" instead?
> >
> > - Alec